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1312,
7
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{1312,7}

aaluudah ;xuu;N se naa;xun hai;N sher ke se har suu
jangal me;N chal bane to phuulaa hai zor ;Dhaakaa

1) there are blood-smeared nails/claws like those of a tiger in every direction!
2) ir/when one would manage to go into the jungle/wilderness, then the dhak has powerfully/violently bloomed

 

Notes:

zor : '(adv.) Vigorously, powerfully; violently, forcibly; extremely, very'. (Platts p.619)

 

;Dhaak : 'The Butea frondosa (syn. palaas ). The tree in full bloom presents a striking spectacle, like fire on the horizon; from natural fissures and incisions made in the bark, issues, during the hot season, a red juice, which soon hardens into a ruby-coloured, brittle, astringent gum, similar to kino, and sold as Bengal kino; lac is collected on the branchlets; the leaves are used as plates, &c., and instead of paper, to wrap up parcels, and are given as fodder to buffaloes; the flowers, with alum, are made into the yellow dye used in the Holi festival, and are also used medicinally; the seeds are given as purgative and anthelmintic, mostly in veterinary practice; the wood is used for coating wells, and for the sacrificial fire)'. (Platts p.569)

S. R. Faruqi:

;Dhaakaa = the dhak tree

How ominous is the image in the first line; and with regard to the jungle, how appropriate it is to give for the long, long red flowers of the dhak, the simile of tiger's claws! Between jangal and bane ( ban = forest) there's the pleasure of a zila. To use for the dhak flowers the simile of a tiger's claws (and those too, bloody tiger claws) is no doubt novel, but behind it there's also a picture of the jungle's terrifyingness and its being full of strange and extraordinary things.

To see a flower as like the bloody claws of a tiger, and for those claws to be scattered everywhere, is to see the jungle in the form of a world that is mysterious, frightening, and new. This world is entirely apart from the city and the affairs of the city. And the individual who invites us to stroll in such a world certainly considers the familiar world of the city to be somewhat contemptible, or at least devoid of interest.

Muhammad Aman Nisar too has versified the theme of red dhak flowers, and the truth is that he's done it well. But he's made the theme limited, and the simile-like image in Mir's first line is far beyond Muhammad Aman Nisar's reach:

;xuun-e jigar se mizhgaa;N yuu;N sur;x ho rahii hai;N
jangal me;N jaise yaaro phuulaa kha;Raa ho ;Dhaakaa

[from the blood of the liver, the eyelashes are becoming red in such a way
the way in the jungle, friends, the dhak would stand blooming]

Both ghazals are formally identical [ham-:tar;h], so it's possible that they might come from some mushairah.

FWP:

SETS == MUSHAIRAH
MOTIFS
NAMES
TERMS == ZILA

The first line is simply frightening, like a cry of alarm. It's impossible to tell what's going on. Is the speaker calling out a warning? Is he in danger? Is he intoxicated? Hallucinating? Insane? We are forced to wait-- under mushairah performance conditions, for as long as is conveniently possible-- for enlightenment from the second line.

Even then, in true mushairah-verse style, the 'punch-word' ;Dhaakaa , which suddenly makes the whole verse intelligible, is withheld until the last possible moment. (And since this ghazal has no refrain, the last possible moment is actually the very end of the second line.)

Moreover, the adverb zor , with its meanings that include 'violently, forcibly, powerfully' (see the definition above), creates its own kind of connection with the first line. And within the second line it's placed in the penultimate position, where its impact is guaranteed to be-- well, 'powerful'. Compare Ghalib's equally effective use of the adverb sa;xt :

G{167,2}.

Note for grammar fans: In the first line, the se is of course short for jaise . In the second line, phuulaa hai could either be the present perfect ('has bloomed') or a shortened form of the past participle ('is in a state of having bloomed'); it's not clear that it makes much difference in this case.