Ghazal 15, Verse 15

{15,15}

mai;N ne rokaa raat ;Gaalib ko vagarnah dekhte
us ke sail-e giryah me;N garduu;N kaf-e sailaab thaa

1) I stopped Ghalib last night, otherwise [you/we] would have seen

2a) in his torrent of weeping, the sky would have been foam of the flood
2b) in his torrent of weeping, the sky was foam of the flood

Notes:

vagarnah is simply an archaic full form of varnah ; GRAMMAR.

 

sail : 'A flowing; a flow of water, a torrent, a current'. (Platts p.712)

 

sailaab : 'Abounding with water, flooded; —s.m. A flood, torrent, stream, deluge, inundation'. (Platts p.712)

Nazm:

That is, the flood of tears would have reached up to the sky. (17)

== Nazm page 17

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, last night I prevented Ghalib from weeping-- otherwise, you would have seen the spectacle that his flood of tears would have reached to the sky and become a torrent of water. (34)

Bekhud Mohani:

That is, the sky would have swum in water the way foam does in a flood. The Ustad of the Age so decrees it. It's worth seeing, where he has put thaa. (38)

FWP:

SETS == DIALOGUE; VARNAH
SKY {15,7}

WARNING verses: {15,15}; {54,3}; {88,4}; {111,16}; {142,1}; {172,3}; {177,2}; {233,17}

On the twofold grammar of varnah (of which vagarnah is an archaic full form) see {15,12}.

The lover either did weep the sky into a mass of foam (clouds), or would have done so if he had not been stopped by a prudent bystander. This 'cosmos-destruction' theme involves sometimes weeping, and sometimes fire. Usually these cataclysms seem to occur only in the lover's own world, but in other verses, like this one, they appear to be evident and dangerous to ordinary human beings as well.

The enjoyable wordplay of sail and sailaab , with their similar but slightly different meanings, also helps to energize the verse.

Compare this verse with its less fortunate, unpublished cousin, {15,16x}.