Ghazal 37, Verse 1

{37,1}

lab-e ;xushk dar-tishnagii-murdagaa;N kaa
ziyaarat-kadah huu;N dil-aazurdagaa;N kaa

1) the dry lip of dead-of-thirst ones--
2) I am a pilgrimage-place of heart-afflicted ones

Notes:

ziyaarat : 'Visiting (a shrine, &c.), pilgrimage'. (Platts p.619)

 

aazurdah : 'Afflicted ... sad, dispirited, sorrowful; vexed... displeased, dissatisfied; weary'. (Platts p.45)

Nazm:

In the first line, 'I' is omitted. And thirst is a metaphor for intensity of longing and ardor. (36)

== Nazm page 036

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, I am the dry lip of those who have passed away from this world in a state of longing and ardor, without having attained success. For this reason I've become a pilgrimage place for those with broken hearts and suffering temperaments. By 'the sorrowful-hearted ones' is meant the group of passionate lovers, who usually remain absorbed in the state of deprivation. (72)

Bekhud Mohani:

In short, my deprivation has reached the limit of perfection. (88)

Josh:

The simile that's been given in the first line-- what purity of language can be greater than this? (105)

FWP:

SETS == A,B

This verse and the other five in the whole original ghazal feel almost like a verse-set, though they are not identified as such in the tradition. Their mood, their theme, their grammatical structure, could hardly be any more similar. In every one of them, the first line is a kind of free-floating image with no verb at all, and the second line is a stylized identification ('I am the such-and-such of the so-and-so ones') that doesn't permit us to nail down any single grammatical or semantic connection with the first line. (There's also the issue of this whole ghazal's being basically macaronic: for discussion, see {37,2}.)

The present verse is a good example: we can see that the two lines have similarly evocative imagery, and a common mood, so that they surely connect. But how exactly? One way of connecting the lines would be to imagine a pilgrimage place in the Hindu sense of a sacred river. The bank of a river is itself dry, but it is constantly lapped by waves, so it may seem to 'drink'; thus it might be like a lip; moreover, its curving shape might be likened to that of a lip.

So does the speaker somehow represent a place of vain pilgrimage-- a riverbank next to a dried-up, waterless 'river'? That would work well with the image of the dry lip of those who have died of thirst. Is he essentially (metonymically?) a dry lip, so that he resembles a riverbank of vain pilgrimage? Is he the ultimate sufferer of vain longing, and thus a sort of culture hero for other lovers, so that he becomes a pilgrimage place in his own right?

No matter how we play with the imagery, the first line remains unmoored. We essentially have three entities in the verse: a 'lip' in the first line, and 'I = pilgrimage-place' in the second line. The relationships here remain murky, and there really doesn't seem to be any way to elucidate them precisely.

Surely, in this verse and the next one both, the powerful image in the first line works not despite, but because of, its unmooredness. It hovers over the second line. The result is a pervasive effect of mood, and the atmosphere created by its vagueness and mystery is what makes the verse work.