Ghazal 45, Verse 3

{45,3}*

ra;hmat agar qabuul kare kyaa ba((iid hai
sharmindagii se ((u;zr nah karnaa gunaah kaa

1.1a) if Mercy would accept it/one,
1.1b) if one would accept mercy,

1.2a) how is it [a] remote [possibility]?!
1.2b) how remote [a possibility] it is!
1.2c) how remote a possibility is it?

2a) out of shame, {not to / do not} make an excuse for sin
2b) {not to / do not} make out of shame, an excuse for sin

Notes:

ba((iid : 'Far, far off, distant, remote'. (Platts p.158)

Nazm:

sharmindagii se adverbially modifies ((u;zr nah karnaa , which is the object of qabuul karnaa ; then kyaa ba((iid hai is the reply to the condition.

== Nazm page 41

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, to make an excuse for sin is an easy thing. But we want an excuse for a sin worse than any sin; for this reason we can't make an excuse for sin either. But our repentance and shame have reached that level where if mercy accepts them in place of an excuse for sin, what's impossible about that? (82)

Bekhud Mohani:

If we don't make an excuse for sin, then the reason is that we don't consider sin to be sin. Rather, we consider making an excuse for sin to be worse than sin. And we don't give our lips permission to open to make an excuse for sin. It's not strange if the mercy of the Provider would consider our not making an excuse itself, to be an excuse for sin, and accept it, and pardon our sin. (102)

Chishti:

The excellence of this verse is that the very thing which is considered a defect (not to make an excuse for sin), Ghalib has established as a [sign of] skill. (386)

FWP:

SETS == GENERATORS; KYA; MIDPOINTS; SUBJECT?

The first line consists of two clauses. In the first one, the grammar of ra;hmat agar qabuul kare certainly permits he conventional (1.1a), which all the commentators prefer, which places the initiative for mercy-showing in (presumably) God's hands. But the grammar also permits 'if [one] would accept mercy' (1.1b), if we assume that a masculine singular subject has been (quite permissibly) omitted. Thus the unorthodox (1.1b) places the initiative-- the choice of whether to accept the divine mercy or not-- in the human hands of the sinner.

The phrase kyaa ba((iid hai has the three readings common to Ghalib's clever kyaa setups: (1.2a) how is it [a] remote [possibility]! (that is, it isn't a remote possibility at all, but in fact highly probable); (1.2b) how remote [a possibility] it is! (that is, it's extremely unlikely); and (1.2c) how remote a possibility is it? (a yes or no question).

But the best part of kyaa ba((iid hai is its brilliant 'midpoint' positioning: it can be considered to apply to the phrase in the first half of the first line, or to the second line. It really puts the final nail in the coffin of any lingering ideas one might have about pinning down 'the' meaning of the verse.

And then if there could be need of any small brass tacks in addition to that final nail, just look at the possibilities of the second line. The verb nah karnaa can of course be a negated infinitive, 'not to make'; but it can also be a negated neutral imperative, addressed to some unspecified 'you': 'do not make'.

Moreover, there's also the question of sharmindagii se . The conventional (2a) applies the 'out of shame' to the whole rest of the line: because of shame, not to (or: do not) make any excuse for sin. This is proper behavior: one is too ashamed to even begin to try to make any excuses for one's awful, inexcusable behavior.

But can we really rule out (2b)? On this alternative reading, the deed which is not done (or which one is enjoined not to do) is 'to make from shame, an excuse for sin' [sharmindagii se gunaah kaa ((u;zr karnaa]. That is, to turn one's shame itself into a justification for further sinfulness. And if this seems a far-fetched reading, just consider the very similar line of argument in {210,1}.

In short, the possible permutations are so numerous that I can't even imagine setting out to explore them all. This is one of the very few 'meaning machine' verses that can claim to rank with the legendary {32,1}.