Ghazal 52, Verse 1

{52,1}

mu;Nd ga))ii;N kholte hii kholte aa;Nkhe;N ;Gaalib
yaar laa))e mirii baalii;N pah use par kis vaqt

1) the eyes closed just as I was in the act of opening them, Ghalib

2a) friends brought her to my pillow/bedside-- but at what a time!
2b) friends brought her to my pillow/bedside-- but when?

Notes:

Nazm:

The eyes' closing is an implication of death. And in this ground there is only this one verse, and it too should have been removed. Later on there's a verse with this very same theme: {72,3}. (48)

== Nazm page 48

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, my companions brought her to my bedside at the time when I was in my death throes. Just as a lamp flickers as it is being extinguished, in the same way my eyes, even as they were opening, closed forever. The meaning is that my friends have made an ill-timed effort, and the beloved has showed ill-timed kindness. (91)

Bekhud Mohani:

It's a verse strangely full of vain longing. (116)

Arshi:

Compare {72,3}. (197)

FWP:

SETS
EYES {3,1}

The quizzical inshaa))iyah ending of line two opens up many moods-- grief, reproach, irony, a genuine question. As usual, it's left for us to decide-- and decide afresh as many times as we recite the verse.

But the main pleasure of the verse is contained in line one, in the idea that my eyes 'closed just as I was in the act of opening them' [mu;Nd ga))ii;N kholte hii kholte aa;Nkhe;N]. C. M. Naim has pointed out (July 2005) how different kholte hii kholte , with its sense of purpose and volition, is from khulte hii khulte , which would merely have referred to the eyes as becoming open, with no further information. And it's also contrasted with mu;Nd ga))ii;N , which simply reports that the eyes closed somehow or other, for reasons unspecified-- perhaps involuntarily, perhaps helplessly-- rather than being closed by the will or action of the speaker.

Note for grammar fans: What this distinction represents is of course the difference between the transitive kholnaa , 'to open', and the intransitive khulnaa , 'to become open' (with no agent involved). Similarly, the intransitive mu;Ndnaa , 'to become closed' (with no agent involved), carries an implicit contrast with the transitive muu;Ndnaa , 'to close'. Exactly the same contrast is created in {72,3}. Here is *Naim's own account* of transitives and intransitives.

Ghalib was so fond of that phrase kholte hii kholte that he used it identically (though perhaps less effectively) in the first line of {72,3} as well. For more on such re-using of phrases and lines, see {49,1}. For more on the beloved's visits to the lover, see {106,2}.

The dying lover's eyes are apparently closed in fatigue or despair, since it's only the news of the beloved's arrival that causes him to begin to open them. And then, just as they are coming open, they close again. Nothing in the verse itself tells us that this second closing is a sign of death--only the power of implication makes us aware of the melancholy and ironic truth.

Possibly the intense emotion generated by awareness of the beloved's presence has been too much for the lover's much-abused heart, and has itself brought on his death. Thus the beloved's life-giving presence, which might almost have revived the lover (or perhaps had actually begun to do so, as his eyes fluttered open), has been death-giving. Compare {9,7}, in which the lover is killed by the stress of Jesus's breathing on him to restore him to life.

Compare Mir's lighter, wittier take on the too-late show of kindness: M{1806,1}.