Ghazal 75, Verse 3

{75,3}

kare hai .sirf bah iimaa-e shu((lah qi.s.sah tamaam
bah :tarz-e ahl-e fanaa hai fasaanah-;xvaanii-e sham((a

1) it makes, only with/like the sign/suggestion of the flame, the tale finished [off]
2) with/like the style of the 'people of oblivion' is the story-telling of the candle

Notes:

kare hai is an archaic form of kartaa hai (GRAMMAR)

 

.sirf : 'Pure, unmixed, unadulterated; neat; sheer; mere; --purely, merely, only, solely, alone, exclusively, &c.'. (Platts p.744)

 

.sarf : 'Turning; changing, converting; change, conversion; shifting or vicissitude (of fortune); passing, using, employing; use, employment; expending; expenditure; cost.... .sarf karnaa : To expend, spend (anything, in or on... ; to disburse; to pass; to use or employ (in or on)'. (Platts p.744)

 

iimaa : 'Sign, nod, beck, hint, suggestion, indirect reference or allusion; emblem, symptom'. (Platts p.115)

Ghalib:

[1858:] Rajab 'Ali Beg 'Surur', who has written fasaanah-e ((ajaa))ib -- the first verse at the beginning of the narrative [daastaan] gives me much pleasure now:

yaadgaar-e zamaanah hai;N ham log
yaad rakhnaa fasaanah hai;N ham log

[we people are a memorial of the age
remember-- we people are a story]

How 'hot' [garm] the second line is, and with regard to a story, what an affinity 'remember' has! (Arshi, introduction, p. 35)
==Urdu text: Khaliq Anjum, vol. 1, p. 278

Nazm:

The candle completes the whole story only through the gesture of the flame. That is, when the flame is lit, then it [=the candle] becomes obliterated from head to foot, the way among the Sufis, the 'people of oblivion', having been set alight, become 'oblivious to themselves' in the fire of passion, and pass away from their lives. (77)

== Nazm page 77

Bekhud Mohani:

In qi.s.sah tamaam karnaa there is an iihaam-- that is, 'to finish the story', or to die.

Faruqi:

First of all please reflect on the word iimaa .... That is, the candle expresses its illumined meaning by means of the symbol [((alaamat] of the flame.

On the head of the candle, the flame has the form of a tongue (they use the tongue as a simile for the candle flame). That is, the the candle makes its thought apparent wordlessly, through the tongue of the candle. The flame of the candle is a symbol of turmoil [shorish] and oblivion [fanaa]. In this way, through the 'tongue' of the flame's condition, the candle says, I am burning, I am becoming obliterated.

In this theme there's a twofold pleasure. One [aspect] is that the candle uses the tongue of the flame-- the flame which has the form of a tongue and is a symbol of burning. The second aspect is that the tonguelessness of the candle is itself its tongue. 'Tongue' is in both meanings-- that is, in the meaning of 'conversation' as well as in the meaning of a part of the body. That is, it's a metaphor for a metaphor, and the dictionary meaning too is appropriate. This type of paradox is the special style of Ghalib and Mir.

Now it's clear that 'story-telling' [fasaanah-;xvaanii] has no special semantic importance.... Having written 'finished the tale' [qi.s.sah tamaam] in the first line, to make the .zil((a of 'story-telling' in the second line would be, for Ghalib, irresistible. This skill too Ghalib learned from Mir {1514,1}:

afsaanah-;xvaa;N kaa la;Rkaa kyaa kahye diidanii hai
qi.s.sah hamaaraa us kaa yaaro shuniidanii hai

[The story-teller's boy-- what can one say?-- is worth seeing
our and his tale, friends, is worth hearing]. (1989: 90-91) [2006: 111-13]

FWP:

SETS == BAH; IDIOMS
CANDLE: {39,1}

This verse completes (and finishes off?) what I think of as a quasi-verse-set consisting of the first three verses of this ghazal. The first verse debates the candle's eternal life vs. its imminent death; the second juxtaposes the candle's (and the poet's) speech/life to its silence/death; in this one, the candle ends its tale in the style of the 'people of oblivion'. Are the people of oblivion dead, or alive? We can hardly say. They have traded in this mortal, transient world for an eternal realm that is utterly beyond our comprehension.

Like the other verses in this little set of three, this one is so rich you almost can't cut through the glowing, radiant, tightly-meshed surface to assign it more than a rather basic meaning. And as in the others, surely much of the pleasure is to be found not in contemplation of a spelled-out, literal meaning, but in the whole ornate but flawlessly integrated, elaborate but perfectly relaxed, 'informal'-feeling quality of the verse.

The praise that Ghalib offers to Surur's verse about story-telling has two elements: the second line's being 'hot' or passionate, and the affinity between the imagery of story-telling and the injunction to 'remember'. He thus praises in another poet's work the same effects he himself creates, through the (suggested) idea of the 'tongue' of the candle-flame, and the wordplay about story-telling, in the present verse.

Bekhud Mohani suggests that the first line contains an iihaam. I think his idea is that if you heard the first line in isolation (as of course you initially would in a mushairah), you might take qi.s.sah tamaam karnaa in its idiomatic sense of 'to finish off'-- that is, to kill something or somebody. But while this is indeed one intended meaning, when we hear the second line we learn that it's only a secondary meaning. The primary meaning is the literal one, 'to complete a tale'-- a meaning that shows an enjoyable connection to the 'story-telling of the candle' in the second line.

I'd argue that there's another kind of iihaam present as well: the word .sirf ('only, merely, exclusively') can be distinguished from the word .sarf (see the definition above) only by its short vowel, and of course short vowels aren't commonly marked in Urdu. I take the reading .sirf from Arshi, who does show the zer marker. But without that diacritic, or in an oral performance in which such short vowels are often ambiguous or half-swallowed, the audience might well think of .sarf -- especially since a form of karnaa is positioned so conveniently right before it. And if you made that guess, you could still read the first line quite comfortably:

1) 'it turns/changes/uses/expends, with/like the sign/suggestion of the flame, the whole tale'

Indeed, not until the last possible moment, when you heard the 'punch' word fasaanah-;xvaanii , could you perceive that your reading, while far from impossible, was a bit less satisfactory in its connection than a reading of .sirf . (That is, you'd be unable to mobilize the elegant doubleness of qi.s.sah tamaam karnaa ('to finish' and 'to finish off'), because you'd need the karnaa for .sarf karnaa .)

For other 'tongue of the candle' verses, see {75,2}.