Ghazal 87, Verse 3

{87,3}*

ho ga))e hai;N jam((a ajzaa-e nigaah-e aaftaab
;zarre us ke ghar kii diivaaro;N ke rauzan me;N nahii;N

1) they have become collected-- the parts of the gaze of the sun

2a) those are not dust-grains in the crevice-work of the walls of her house
2b) there are no dust-grains in the crevice-work of the walls of her house

Notes:

Nazm:

That is, even the sun has an ardor for staring at her. (86)

== Nazm page 86

Hasrat:

About the many dust-grains that can be seen in the light of the sun-rays that enter the beloved's house through the crevice-work in the wall, he says it's as if they are pieces of the sun's gaze that are ardent for a pilgrimage to the beloved's face. (78)

Bekhud Mohani:

In the crevice-work of the beloved's walls, these are not glittering dust-grains; rather, they are pieces of the glance of the sun. That is, the sun wanted to look at the beloved's face, but his glances remained scattered, and he could not summon the strength for vision. The pleasure is that worldly people's gaze can't behold the sun, and becomes scattered. But the beloved is so beautiful that the sun's glances become scattered. As Ghalib says, {158,7}.

It is also worth noticing that Mirza did not say 'wall of the house', but rather 'crevice-work of the walls of the house'. From this the sun's ardor for sight is manifest: wherever there was a hope of seeing her radiance/appearance, there the sun's rays, in their ardor for sight, arrived. (178)

Josh:

A theme of just this kind is present in a verse of Hazrat Dagh. But the world of expression is absolutely different. He says:

jam ga))ii hai aa;Nkh kii putlii kisii mushtaaq kii
mai;N nah maanuu;Ngaa kih ((aariz par tumhaare ;xaal hai

[the pupil of the eye of some ardent one has settled there--
I won't agree that on your cheek is a beauty-spot]

The theme of na:zar jamaa kar dekhnaa too is used with just such supremacy as in Mirza's verse. (176)

FWP:

SETS
GAZE: {10,12}
ZARRAH: {15,12}

On the nuances of rauzan , 'crevice-work', see {64,4}; the word is also used in the following verse, {87,4}.

The possibilities of this verse hinge on the subtleties of negation in the second line. Since (by no coincidence, of course) we can't tell whether it lacks a subject and verb, as in (1), or only a verb, as in (2), both readings are possible:

2a) Those things you see in the crevice-work of the walls of her house are not dust-motes. (You think you see dust-motes, but what you see are really fragments of the sun's gaze that have all united there.)

2b) There are no dust-motes in the crevice-work of the walls of her house. (You don't see any dust-motes, because all those bits of earthly dross have been burned away or otherwise displaced by the sun's concentrated gaze, which will brook not even the smallest interference. Or: you don't see any dust-motes because those small glittering points of light have now come together as a pure concentrated solar gaze.)

So it's one or the other; in this case, unusually, it probably can't be both at once. Except for the clever grammar of the second line, I can't see much else going on in the verse.