Ghazal 87, Verse 8

{87,8}

qa:trah qa:trah ik hayuul;aa hai na))e naasuur kaa
;xuu;N bhii ;zauq-e dard se faari;G mire tan me;N nahii;N

1) every single drop is a singular/particular/unique/excellent essence of a new {running sore / ulcer}
2) even/also the blood in my body is never {finished with / free of} the taste/relish of/for pain

Notes:

hayuulaa : 'Matter; first principle (of everything material)'. (Platts p.1246)

naasuur : 'Wounding; --a running sore, an ulcer; a fistula'. (Platts p.1114)

 

faari;G : 'Free from care, or anxiety; contented; free from labour or business; free, at leisure, unoccupied, unemployed, disengaged; —cleared, absolved, discharged; —ceasing (from labour, &c.), ending, finishing'. (Platts p.775)

 

;zauq : 'Taste, enjoyment, delight, joy, pleasure, voluptuousness'. (Platts p.578)

Nazm:

That is, every drop of blood assumes the form of a running sore. Just as from an essence when one form vanishes the next one replaces it, so every drop of blood in turn assumes the form of a drop, and losing the aspect of blood will take on the aspect of a running sore. And wherever in the body there is any trace of blood, there a running sore will develop. (87)

== Nazm page 87

Bekhud Mohani:

The whole body is becoming riddled with running sores. The crest-jewel of this is that even my blood is absorbed in the pleasure of pain. Whatever drop of blood has remained, it too is creating the effect of becoming a new running sore. (179)

Josh:

That is, every drop of blood is assuming the shape of a running sore.... The point of the utterance is that I have become so mad for the pleasure of the pain of love that this madness has flowed through every vein and blood-vessel., and every single drop of blood longs to become a running sore. (177)

FWP:

SETS == EK; GROTESQUERIE

I've never heard this one recited once in my whole life, and it's not hard to figure out why. It's Exhibit A for my 'grotesquerie' category. It's just gross.

Undeniably, it follows the general logic of the ghazal in its extravagant but well-grounded wordplay. It makes clever use of the familiar pleasure/pain oscillation. Technically, there's nothing wrong with it. There's a fine use of bhii (to imply that the blood's state of mind simply mirrored my own), and an interesting use of hayuulaa , an exotic word borrowed from the Greek. Conceptually speaking, it's not so far from {10,4}, in which every wound is the 'seed of a fireworks-tree'.

But it nevertheless is repugnant. Although I can't prove it, since such judgments are subjective, I bet you'll agree. It has that over-the-top, more-than-we-really-wanted-to-know quality. A running sore (ulcer, fistula) is just not going to be poetically enjoyable in the ghazal context. It's too graphic for its own good. It carries more baggage of physical disgustingness than it can manage to lift.

However, let me also note that, as with the other verses in my 'grotesquerie' category, the commentators don't seem especially bothered about it, so it's perhaps a culturally-specific attitude that I'm expressing. But then let me also note that the commentators' silence may not be so significant, for they're rarely bothered about much of anything, once they can provide each verse with an acceptable prose paraphrase.