Ghazal 117, Verse 3

{117,3}

agar vuh sarv-qad garm-e ;xiraam-e naaz aa jaave
kaf-e har ;xaak-e gulshan shakl-e qumrii naalah-farsaa ho

1) if that cypress-statured one would become warm/enthusiastic for a stroll/strut of coquetry
2) every handful of dust in the garden, in the likeness of a turtledove, would be lament-wearing-out

Notes:

;xiraam : 'Pace, gait, walk, march; stately gait, graceful walk; strut'. (Platts p.488)

 

aa jaave is an archaic variant of aa jaa))e (GRAMMAR)

 

farsaa : 'Wearing, rubbing; obliterating, effacing'. (Platts p.778)

Nazm:

Every handful of dust [har kaf-e ;xaak] would become a turtledove, for the reason that the turtledove is ash-colored [;xaakistarii]. (126)

== Nazm page 126

Bekhud Mohani:

If the beloved, whose stature is like that of a cypress, would happen, out of coquetry, to pass through the garden, then every handful of dust in the garden would begin to lament like a turtledove. That is, the effect of her beauty would make every dust-grain into the hem of a lover's garment. (238)

Faruqi:

The interpretation is entirely clear, but some wordplay demands attention. All [the commentators] have said that with respect to 'turtledove', 'handful of dust' is fine, because the turtledove is considered to be dust-colored. Now look beyond: (1) sarv , gulshan , qumrii ; (2) garm and ;xaak (to burn up and become dust), are first of all an affinity, and second a .zil((a . In the light of this, another interpretation arises: that the heat of the beloved's gait will burn up the dust of the garden, and as a result of this a lament will arise from the breast of the dust.

The word naaz is not a filler. The point is that when the beloved walks with a 'coquettish gait', only then does the dust of the garden raise a lament like a turtledove's. That is, if she walked with an ordinary gait with no coquetry in it, then she wouldn't create this effect. The meaning of kaf-e har ;xaak-e gulshan can be, in addition to gulshan kii har kaf-e ;xaak , har gulshan kii kaf-e ;xaak as well. In this case, the heat of the coquettish gait not only affects one garden, but can be seen in all gardens. Consider these other examples of wordplay: (3) ;xaak , shakl (because all forms are made of dust); (4) sarv , ;xiraam (because the cyprus is [here] considered to be motionless); (5) the affinity between naalah and garm is plain. (1989: 202) [2006: 224]

FWP:

SETS == WORDPLAY

This is the kind of verse that makes me especially grateful for Faruqi's commentary, which I've translated here in its entirety. The verse shows off Ghalib's power of extravagant wordplay, and Faruqi is uniquely skilled in recognizing it all, and then laying it all out analytically.

Still, other than major wordplay, there's nothing much going on in this verse, as far as I can tell. It's not the kind (of which there are so many) in which wordplay and meaning-play form an irresistibly enticing network that goes on ramifying forever. And the wordplay itself feels a bit awkward and forced: it's easier even to imagine every dust-grain having a tiny heart tied onto it (as in the equally extravagant {29,1}) than to imagine the dust as collecting itself into handfuls, then the handfuls all forming themselves into turtledoves, then the turtledoves all starting to lament. Where's the real 'objective correlative' for all that? For that matter, why is it the dust-turtledoves who lament? Why isn't it the cypresses who lament (out of envy, despair, and adoration), since it's her stature that's at issue?

Turtledoves seem to bring out the abstraction in Ghalib: for an even more over-the-top example, see {230,4}.

Note for grammar fans: the ordering of the words in kaf-e har ;xaak , though Hamid complains about it (96)-- and I can certainly sympathize-- is unusual, but apparently not contrary to the rules of i.zaafat usage. For another such instance, see {214,6}, with its rag-e har ;xaar . But the present verse seems more egregious: one can easily visualize 'every thorn' and even endow it with a vein, but how does one visualize 'every dust', much less endow it with a 'hand'? However, the word order does have the advantage of letting the second line evoke the idiomatic expression 'to wring the hands of regret' [kaf-e afsos malnaa] (for an example, see {145,4}).