Ghazal 138, Verse 4

{138,4}

kii us ne garm siinah-e ahl-e havas me;N jaa
aave nah kyuu;N pasand kih ;Than;Daa makaan hai

1) she 'warmed up' a place in the breast of the people of lust
2) why wouldn't it please her? for it's a 'cool house'

Notes:

Nazm:

By 'people of lust' is meant the Rival, for in his breast there's no burning of passion, and for this reason it's been called a 'cool house'. (147-48)

== Nazm page 147; Nazm page 148

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, in the Rivals' hearts there is no fire of the burning of passion, as there is in ours. And for this reason the beloved has made a place in the Rivals' hearts. Everyone likes to live in a 'cool house', and the heart in which there is no fire of passion will certainly serve as a 'cold-chamber' [sard-;xaanah]. (204)

Bekhud Mohani:

The lust-worshippers pleased the beloved-- and why wouldn't they please her, for where in them is the impatience and restlessness and bitterness of passion? (270)

FWP:

SETS == HUMOR; MUSHAIRAH; WORDPLAY

Here's another witty and delightful example of Faruqi's observation that wordplay is really meaning-play as well. The beloved has 'warmed up' a space for herself (think of a 'housewarming') in the breast of her lustful lovers. Naturally she likes it, as the speaker (surely the true lover) comments ruefully or bitterly, for it's a 'cool' house, free of the unquenchable fires of passion. And in a hot climate like that of North India, everyone would be glad to live in a cool house, as Bekhud Dihlavi observes. In a verse like this, how can we disentangle the wordplay from the meaning-play?

It's also a great classic mushairah verse in structure. The first line makes us curious about her choice of dwelling, and the first half of the second line only increases our eagerness to know what's going on. But the punch-phrase is withheld until the last possible moment. Surely the original audience must have gotten, with the sudden flash of comprehension, a really good laugh.

For another meditation on the relative 'heat' of the hearts of the lover and the worldlings, see {5,6}.

Compare Mir's beloved, who has moved instead into a better dwelling: her true lover's breast: M{324,6}.