Ghazal 145, Verse 2

{145,2}

;xizaa;N kyaa fa.sl-e gul kahte hai;N kis ko ko))ii mausam ho
vuhii ham hai;N qafas hai aur maatam baal-o-par kaa hai

1) what is autumn? what do they call rose-season? whatever season might be,
2) there's only/emphatically we, there's the cage, and there's the mourning of/for wing and feather

Notes:

Nazm:

In the construction of this verse is the beauty that six phrases/sentences have come into two lines. And in the expression of meaning is the beauty that the complaint of captivity is through the tongue of the nightingale, and in the complaint the prolixity [a:tanaab] gives pleasure: here the author has expressed a small meaning in a number of words. And a further pleasure of the prolixity is that the tiny sentences would be numerous, rather than becoming one long sentence-- although there would be more words in such a sentence, the pleasure of prolixity would not be created. (154)

== Nazm page 154

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, we don't know what they call 'autumn' and what they call 'spring'. Our situation doesn't change at all in any season. We are the same captive nightingale, imprisoned in a cage for a long time. That is, neither is the beloved enticed by the effect of love, nor does sighing and lamenting have any power. (212)

Bekhud Mohani:

This verse is peerless for pain and emotional effect.... From vuhii ham hai;N it is understood that our situation today is just as it was at the beginning of captivity. The continuation of captivity has not been able to erase it. From 'mourning for wing and feather' it's clear that wings and feathers have been finished off with such unfeelingness that they would not be able to emerge again.... In this verse there is prolixity. And when making a complaint, the prolonging of speech seems attractive. In prolixity, there ought to be a number of small sentences. (282)

FWP:

SETS == I AND
SPRINGTIME: {13,2}

The commentators generally locate the verse's center of gravity in the first line, with its burst of small abrupt rhetorical questions. It's indeed unusual, as Nazm points out, for a two-line verse to accommodate so many separate utterances at all, much less with such ease and colloquialness. He counts six. Technically he's right, but rhetorically the three in the second line really work as one.

For this is also another of Ghalib's 'I and X' verses: the second line cleverly invokes the structure of a common, highly emphatic expression of strong-- though varying and sometimes ambiguous-- emotion. For more discussion of this colloquial expression, see {5,6}. A relatively close parallel is the second line of {71,3}: both lines share a 'we are, and X is' framework. But in this present verse alone, conspicuously, there are three such entities rather than two. The idiomatic expression is changed, but it still works. The starkness and simplicity of this expression are as striking as the intensity that it generates.

This is one of the verses in which the lover speaks as a bird; for others, see {126,5}.