Ghazal 159, Verse 5

{159,5}

tum ko bhii ham dikhaa))e;N kih majnuu;N ne kyaa kiyaa
fur.sat kashaakash-e ;Gam-e pinhaa;N se gar mile

1) to you too we would show what Majnun did
2) if we would get leisure from the tension of hidden grief

Notes:

Nazm:

That is, if grief would not so grip us, then we too, like Majnun, would go out into the desert. (171)

== Nazm page 171

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, we would have showed you to what extent Majnun-- that is, Qais-- advanced the cause of lover-ship, but the constraint is that hidden grief, out of modesty and fear of disgrace, seizes us and draws us back, and forbids us to go out to the wilderness. (228)

Bekhud Mohani:

We too, in madness would have set out for the wilderness, and would not have proved inferior to Majnun. But we're helpless-- hidden grief does not let us stir. That is, if there weren't the fear of the secret of passion becoming revealed, then we too would be the Majnun of our time. The phrase 'hidden grief' testifies to this meaning. (306)

FWP:

SETS

The clever bhii in that little phrase 'to you too' at once makes it clear that either (1) we have shown this to other people already, so that our credentials for Majnun-ship are not in doubt; or that (2) you would see it the way Laila saw what Majnun did, so that you are a Laila, and we are a Majnun. (Or, of course, both.)

What exactly prevents us from showing you what Majnun did? The second line actually offers an unresolvable number of possibilities:

=a lack of 'leisure': what Majnun did was rather trivial, and we're busy with more important pursuits.

=a 'tension' [kashaakash], literally a 'pulling back and forth': Majnun was able to break the tension and simply run off into the wilderness, but we're engaged in an inner struggle much more complex than his.

=a 'grief': Majnun had the energy and vitality to run all around in the desert, but our grief is so much deeper and more deadly that we're not even able to move.

=a 'hidden' grief: Majnun made a rather naive, childish display of himself, since he lacked the fortitude to control his behavior; but we are stronger and more enduring. (Compare {100,4}.)

This is one of a group of what I call 'snide remarks about famous lovers'; for more on these, see {100,4}. This verse also reminds me of {5,5}, in its dismissive, shrug-of-the-shoulders attitude toward mere outward theatrics.