Ghazal 174, Verse 8

{174,8}*

qa:trah daryaa me;N jo mil jaa))e to daryaa ho jaa))e
kaam achchhaa hai vuh jis kaa kih ma-aal achchhaa hai

1) if/when a drop would mingle with the sea, then it might/would become the sea
2) that task is good, of which the outcome/end/result is good

Notes:

ma-aal : 'A place (and a state or condition) to which a person or thing returns, and to which he (or it) ultimately comes; end, aim, event, consequence, termination, issue, tendency'. (Platts p.983)

Nazm:

The image [tam;siil] of the drop and the sea has been taken from the Sufis, but it has also extremely much pleased the poets. No one has omitted it, so much so that this theme has become shopworn. Now, whoever versifies it, the verse itself becomes devoid of relish/pleasure. The author too has composed with this theme a number of times, and the best one is {21,8}, because the relish of the idiom has spiced up a flavorless theme. (195-96)

== Nazm page 195; Nazm page 196

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, for the branch/offshoot to move toward its source/origin [a.sl] is better than all other actions in the world. (253)

Bekhud Mohani:

When the drop merges with the sea, then it no longer has any further fear that the earth or the air might swallow it up. In the same way when a man would merge his individual self with the Lord, then he no longer fears oblivion, and he becomes protected from all the world's changes. That task of which the result would be good, only that one is good-- that is, for a person only to merge into the source is good. (343)

FWP:

SETS
DROP/OCEAN: {21,8}

The commentators are convinced that the verse is recommending such a merger, but if we look closely at the grammar, it's not. The first line actually uses two subjunctive verbs, the effect of which is to render the proposition extremely tentative-looking. (More common, and more assertive, is a subjunctive 'if/when' verb paired with a future 'then' verb.)

After such a tentative first line, the second line moves to radical abstractness. A certain kind of 'task' or 'action' is defined as 'good'-- but we're not told whether the action described in the first line falls within this definition or not.

The process of deciding is made remarkably subtle and elegant by means of the word ma;aal , which is related to avval and has a strong connotation of returning to one's origin. The task is good of which the aim or purpose-- or 'return to origin'-- is good. There's a doubleness here of teleology on the one hand (the sense of a final purpose or goal), and source on the other (the sense of a return to some primal condition).

So we're still left to ask, is it good for the drop to merge, in either a teleological or an originary way, into the sea? The Indo-Muslim Sufistic chorus answering affirmatively is loud and clear, and just about unanimous. It seems almost perverse to consider any other possibility. I offer only two small bits of counterevidence: the unusually tentative grammar of the first line, and the conspicuous set of verses in which Ghalib insists on the virtue of using only one's own resources, and the shame of borrowing or being dependent. For more on such verses, see {9,1}.

I certainly don't think that Ghalib meant for us to conclude that the drop should not merge with the sea. But it's also clear that in this verse (unlike some others) he didn't set up-- as he certainly could have-- a resonant endorsement in favor of doing so. He's taken care to leave the question open, to force us to decide for ourselves, bringing to bear the evidence of our own temperaments and our own lives.

And do we really need that kih in the second line? My students all agree that it ought to count as padding; for more on this, see {17,9}.

Note for meter fans: The word ma-aal is pronounced and scanned ma-aal, short-long. (Compare qur-aan ). See the definition above. Don't confuse it with maal meaning 'wealth, property'.

Here's my attempt at a translation (1985).