Ghazal 210, Verse 7

{210,7}*

is rang se u;Thaa))ii kal us ne asad kii na((sh
dushman bhii jis ko dekh ke ;Gam-naak ho ga))e

1) in {this / such a} style/manner/mood she yesterday lifted up Asad's bier
2) that even/also the enemies, having seen it, became grieved

Notes:

rang : 'Beauty, bloom; expression, countenance, appearance, aspect; fashion, style; character, nature; mood, mode, manner, method; kind, sort; state, condition'. (Platts p.601)

Nazm:

In which style did she lift it? With contempt? Or with respect, such that she herself lent a shoulder, she herself honored it? Between these two meanings, for neither one to be selected-- this is the reason that the verse seems loose [sust]. [He goes on to criticize, for reasons of technical metrical theory, the treating of the final syllable in u;Thaa))ii as short.] (238)

== Nazm page 239

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, contrary to expectation, she lifted the bier of Mirza Asadullah Khan Sahib 'Ghalib' with such respect and honor that, seeing it, the fire of envy/jealousy flared up in the enemies' livers. (298)

Bekhud Mohani:

[Disagreeing with Nazm:] Alas-- what in the verse is an excellence, is here being called a flaw. If some one meaning were selected, then the other aspect would have been left behind. Now this verse can be recited on an occasion of contempt, in the same way as on an occasion of honor. [He goes on to respond to Nazm's metrical arguments:] In this way, when reading the verse, having arrived at u;Thaa))ii a kind of musicality [tarannum] and force is created. Rather, the surprise and heartfelt grief of the speaker are conveyed. (429)

FWP:

SETS

Nazm is dead wrong-- surprisingly so, in someone who is usually such a perceptive reader. And how much Bekhud Mohani must have enjoyed having such a juicy chance to lambaste him! Bekhud Mohani rightly says that what Nazm presents as a flaw is the verse's remarkable and even stellar virtue. For it's perfectly clear that, as so often, each of the readings of the first line yields a differently complex and enjoyable reading of the second line. Such a basic Ghalibian structural principle-- how could Nazm miss it?

This could be called a verse of implication, because the interpretations of the first line don't depend on any shifts in the actual literal reading of the line, but simply on differently imagined understandings of what is implied by 'in such a (literally, "this") way' [is rang se]. (Even if it were read as 'in that way', with an us , the only difference would be perhaps a small loss of immediacy.)

Thus if she lifted the bier in an extremely contemptuous, disdainful way, then even the enemies would be grieved, because such a hostile overreaction, even after his death, would make even them feel sorry for the deceased. And perhaps they'd feel sorry also because they'd realize, if they were in fact Rivals, that the same fate might well befall them.

Similarly, if she lifted the bier with carelessness and indifference, as though she couldn't even remember whose funeral it was, an equally ominous realization of their own vulnerability to such treatment would cause them grief and dismay.

And if she lifted the bier in an extremely (and unexpectedly?) respectful, sorrowful, even reverent way, her (show of) mourning would awaken the humanity in the enemies' hearts, and make them reflect on the human condition, the common fate of us all, and so on; so that they too would feel their own share of the grief of mortality. (On this reading the excellently versatile bhii seems closer to 'also' than to the more common 'even'.)