Foundations of the Regulatory State
 Spring 2005, Section 3

Comments on memo assignment #2

(Posted 3/11/2005)


For your reference, here is a link to the original assignment.

In retrospect, this assignment was somewhat more open-ended that would have been ideal, so the TA's and I gave a fair amount of leeway in your choice of material to cover. Still, we were looking for you to apply ideas from the course, so memos that spent excess space summarizing facts from the background news articles were less effective.

Not everyone was equally adept at the bullet-point format; the most common problem was writing in an overly abbreviated fashion. Many of you used sentence fragments or even single words or phrases as the individual elements of your memo, and this was not effective.  Remember that the function of a bullet-point memo is to provide information effectively and efficiently to a busy reader, and so it should be written to be readable, with transparent organization and complete [or almost-complete] sentences for each point. [Formatting is also important; for example, memos are much more readable if they use single spacing within each point, and extra spacing between points. And using consistent and simple symbols for the setoffs [e.g., round or square bullets] is much easier on the eyes than using a variety of non-standard typographical symbols [e.g., fancy arrows or dashes].

As with the first memo, many of you spread yourselves too thin by trying to cover too many points. The bullet-point format does allow you to be more concise, but it's still important to explain your points clearly and in depth. In fact, writing in the bullet-point format is good practice for writing short essays generally, since it forces you to pay attention to the internal structure of your paragraphs, and the relationship between major and minor points.

The next memo will also be in bullet-point format to give you extra practice in the format; here for your reference is ra sampling of student essays that I thought were among the most effective we received. 


[1]

To: Head of Policy Analysis
From: Policy Analyst
Re: Regulatory Strategies for Cox-2 Inhibitors

Five possible regulatory strategies and their major considerations have been identified.

1. Continue the present approach of encouraging pharmaceutical companies to conduct their own trials.

2. Ban Cox-2 inhibitors.

3. Encourage stricter warnings on labels and advertising.

4. File civil and/or criminal charges against the makers of Vioxx.

5. Create a policy where possible drug risks are immediately disclosed.


[2]

TO: Mr. Smith, Counsel, FDA
RE: Cox-2 Inhibitor Regulation
DATE: February 25, 2005

An FDA-appointed panel of doctors has just found that cox-2 inhibitor pain medications markedly increase the risk of heart attack and strokes. In response, the FDA can:

Option 1 (preferred): Restrict direct-to-consumer advertising and require heightened scrutiny of prescriptions.

Option 2: Ban sales of cox-2 inhibitors.

Option 3: Maintain cox-2 regulation at its current level, relying on liability to police the medicine’s use.


[3]

To: Head of Department
Date: February 25, 2005
Re: Proposed Regulatory Policy of Already-Approved Drugs

 


[4]

I. The FDA could require all Cox-2 inhibitors to be withdrawn from the market.

II. The FDA could allow all Cox-2 inhibitors to remain on market, under certain conditions:

III. Under some or all of the conditions above, the FDA could allow on ly certain Cox-2 inhibitors to remain on the market.

IV. The FDA could allow Cox-2 inhibitors to remain on the market and re ly on private enforcement (tort lawsuits) to police the activities of drug companies.

 


[5]

Major Regulatory Options for COX-2 Inhibitors

The FDA should introduce regulation to address health problems associated with COX-2 Inhibitors

•  The FDA's complete reliance on voluntary efforts by drug makers to evaluate and control their drug's safety has failed to address health problems for COX-2 users.

•  The market has not corrected the problem on its own

•  Businesses lack incentives to conduct adequate studies, and are motivated by financial gain (only indirectly by safety concerns)

•  Litigation often only affects one case at a time, and is a slow and expensive process.

•  The FDA has a credibility deficit that can be improved through effective regulation.

•  Counter: The FDA has had problems regulating in the past (ie. Vioxx), regulation could be costly

•  But: The correct regulation, regulation that was cost-effective and reached a large percentage of end users, could improve consumer's health without suffering from the problems associated with these and other counter arguments

 

Active regulatory options:

•  Warning Labels: Require that manufacturers of COX-2 Inhibitors include stricter, more detailed warning labels containing information about health risks and side effects.

•  This would be an inexpensive way to reach almost every consumer as they take COX-2 Inhibitors

•  It would demonstrate active FDA involvement in drug safety.

•  The cost would be relatively small, when compared with other regulations or litigation

•  Labels already exist and would only need to be altered.

•  Counter: Labels would lead to information overload, possibly causing consumers to disregard labels along with useful information they already receive

•  But: Warning labels could be made clear and easy to read.

 

•  Education: Require drug makers to provide educational materials to doctors before the prescribe, and patients before they take, COX-2 Inhibitors

•  Ex. Pamphlets / medical guides outlining: when to take COX-2 Inhibitors, when to take over the counter drugs, health risks associated with COX-2 Inhibitors, etc.

•  Increased education would result in informed consumers, more able to evaluate health risks, ask questions, and make better decisions.

•  Doctors, adequately informed and educated, could make better decisions as to when to subscribe COX-2, how the drugs would affect particular patients, and when alternative measures might be more effective.

•  This would also lead to greater disclosure by the companies producing COX-2 Inhibitors

•  Incentivize manufacturers to increase concern for the health of their consumers

•  Counter: This could require costly supervision by the FDA and may be hard to enforce in practice.

•  But: More needs to be done than better labeling alone, and this system is more cost effective than others.

 

•  Combining warning labels and education would be the best regulatory scheme.

•  The effectiveness of labeling would increase as consumers were educated, and education would be reinforced by labels containing information about risks.

•  The absence of regulation would perpetuate the problem.

•  Other regulatory plans, like consumer advertising, would be more costly, less effective, or both due to information distribution costs and the higher risk of information overload.

 


Key to symbols used to mark essays:

On some essays we circled particular words or phrases that seemed found questionable or unclear, and attached these symbols to them.  

good point or argument
! excellent point or argument
~ fair point, or incompletely or unclearly expressed
weak point
point needs elaboration
" point already made, repetitive
? unclear
?? very unclear, confused, mixing together separate points
x mistake of law, misstatement of fact, misuse of term
x? point appears mistaken
# irrelevant or tangential point
#? point's relevance unclear
#cl
point irrelevant to interests of client or to your assigned role
abs overly abstract
c-a fails to discuss obvious counterargument
conc conclusory; result of argument stated without reasoning
contra
contradiction
dir? didn't follow directions
exag otherwise good point is overstated or exaggerated
ff fighting facts: contradicting stated facts or making assumptions inconsistent with them
jg
jargon: using technical language as substitute for analysis
lec lecturing: abstract discussion unconnected to or unnecessary for the problem at hand
ll laundry list: throwing in relevant and irrelevant arguments alike, without distinction
mix mixing together issues that should be discussed separately
ns non sequitur: conclusion does not follow
rew reword phrasing or diction
rf repeats facts unnecessarily
sa straw argument: weak or caricatured argument set up merely for sake of rebuttal
ss
slow start:  too much space spent restating the issue or getting to the point
tc throat-clearing; same as slow start
ua unsupported assertion
vb verbose; too much space devoted to the point or points in question
vg discussion is overly vague