Foundations of the Regulatory State
 Spring 2005, Section 3

Comments on memo assignment #3

(Posted 4/13/2005)


For your reference, here is a link to the original assignment.

The class performed noticeably better on this memo than on memo #2, perhaps in part due to greater familiarity with the bullet-point format. Most of you improved your balance between breadth and depth, and your explanations were clearer, although a number of students still expressed their points in too abbreviated a fashion.

In terms of preparing yourself to write effective exam essays, there were three common deficiencies that turned up on the memos:

Hhere for your reference is a sampling of the student essays that I thought were among the most effective we received. 


[1]

To: Stephen L. Johnson
Re: Clear Skies policy and cost-benefit analysis

Because the Clear Skies Initiative has failed a crucial vote, it will fall to the EPA to implement the policy.

There are two ways to do OMB's required cost-benefit analysis:

I. The value of statistical life (VSL) technique used to analyze Bush's Clear Skies Initiative.

II. The value of statistical life-years extended (VSLY) method.

Recommendation: to meet OMB requirements, we should use both VSL without age discounting and VSLY to get a range of values for the benefits of regulation. We should invite debate about the differences in the figures to show that the EPA is not strictly focused on numbers but also on environmental problem solving.


[2]

To: Stephen L. Johnson
From: Special Assistant for Policy Analysis
Internal Policy Memo: Age-Adjusted Cost Benefit Analysis

Recent controversy over the EPA's use of age-adjusted cost-benefit analysis stems primarily from competing normative and positive conceptions of environmental policy.

Conclusion: in order to abate current controversy and prevent future controversies, the government should (1) adopt a more flexible methodology, and (2) conduct further research on age-adjusted analysis.


[3]

 


[4]

To: Stephen Johnson, E.P.A. Administrator
Subject: age-adjusted analysis in willingness-to-pay measures
Date: 4/13/2005


[5]

The Controversy

The controversy concerns whether to adjust for age when doing cost-benefit analysis in environmental policy

Recommended Government Position

The recommended government position is to implicitly adjust for age while counting each discrete life as being of equal value.

The Potential Fallout of Adopting Age-Adjusted Analysis

 


Key to symbols used to mark essays:

On some essays we circled particular words or phrases that seemed found questionable or unclear, and attached these symbols to them.  

good point or argument
! excellent point or argument
~ fair point, or incompletely or unclearly expressed
weak point
point needs elaboration
" point already made, repetitive
? unclear
?? very unclear, confused, mixing together separate points
x mistake of law, misstatement of fact, misuse of term
x? point appears mistaken
# irrelevant or tangential point
#? point's relevance unclear
#cl
point irrelevant to interests of client or to your assigned role
abs overly abstract
c-a fails to discuss obvious counterargument
conc conclusory; result of argument stated without reasoning
contra
contradiction
dir? didn't follow directions
exag otherwise good point is overstated or exaggerated
ff fighting facts: contradicting stated facts or making assumptions inconsistent with them
jg
jargon: using technical language as substitute for analysis
lec lecturing: abstract discussion unconnected to or unnecessary for the problem at hand
ll laundry list: throwing in relevant and irrelevant arguments alike, without distinction
mix mixing together issues that should be discussed separately
ns non sequitur: conclusion does not follow
rew reword phrasing or diction
rf repeats facts unnecessarily
sa straw argument: weak or caricatured argument set up merely for sake of rebuttal
ss
slow start:  too much space spent restating the issue or getting to the point
tc throat-clearing; same as slow start
ua unsupported assertion
vb verbose; too much space devoted to the point or points in question
vg discussion is overly vague