Ghazal 191, Verse 2

{191,2}

mai;N bulaataa to huu;N us ko magar ay ja;zbah-e dil
us pah ban jaa))e kuchh aisii kih bin aa))e nah bane

1) I do call her, but, oh passion of the heart,
2) may something come upon her, such that she can't stand not to come!

Notes:

ja;zbah : 'Passion, rage, fury; violent desire'. (Platts p.378)

 

ja;zb : 'Drawing, attraction; allurement; absorption'. (Platts p.378)

Nazm:

kisii par ban jaanaa is that person's being involved in a difficulty. (214)

== Nazm page 214

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, I do call her, but there's no hope that from my calling she will come. Alas, emotion of the heart-- if you would help me a bit, and cast such an attraction over her that she wouldn't be able to stand not to come, then she can come. (273)

Bekhud Mohani:

Oh attraction of the heart, through your claim I call her, but now it's your task that she would become so restless that she wouldn't be able to endure not to come. (374)

FWP:

SETS == IDIOMS
SCRIPT EFFECTS: {33,7}

Like the previous verse, this one has a second line that is full of sound and script effects and idiomatic (and almost untranslatable) wordplay. In that one we had bane (twice) and banaa))e ; here we have ban jaa))e , bin aa))e , and bane . Above all the ban and bin not only look the same in normal, non-diacriticized Urdu script, but come enjoyably close to rhyming; and since one is followed by jaa))e and the other by aa))e , they have an even more twinlike air.

On bin aa))e and related forms: This is an archaism; nowadays it would be aane ke binaa , or more commonly aane ke ba;Gair ; you'll also occasionally see ba;Gair aane ke (which has its own archaic Ghalibian form; for discussion of this see {59,1}). Nowadays bin is very little used. For another example of the pattern see the following verse, {191,3}. A reversed example with aa))e bin appears in {201,2}; {201,4} offers bin kahe .

The commentators generally feel that the 'passion of the heart' is being addressed because it's expected to achieve the effect envisioned in the second line. The derivation of ja;zbah from ja;zb , with its sense of 'attraction' or 'drawing', readily points in that direction. But it's also clear that the verb ban jaa))e is intransitive, so that no instructions are being issued to the 'passion'.

Thus it's also possible that the lover is just communing with himself, desperately longing, in the wild tangle of his own emotions, for the beloved too to feel something of that same desperate longing (though he knows she doesn't and probably won't). In that sense the 'passion of the heart' is the most congenial companion, and thus is addressed as a sympathizer, a companion in misery. Consider the next verse, {191,3}, in which the lover is definitely longing for something from a position of helplessness ('oh if only... !').

Like the previous verse {191,1}, this one really pleases through the cleverly twisted, idiomatic wordplay in the second line.