Ghazal 21, Verse 13

{21,13}

balaa-e jaa;N hai ;Gaalib us kii har baat
((ibaarat kyaa ishaarat kyaa adaa kyaa

1) it's a mortal disaster, Ghalib-- her every word/speech/circumstance

2a) whether speech/expression, or gestures, or style/grace
2b) what speech/expression! what gestures! what style/grace!
2c) what is the speech/expression? what are the gestures? what is the style/grace?
2d) is it the speech/expression? is it the gestures? is it the style/grace?

Notes:

baat : 'Speech, language, word, saying, conversation, talk, gossip, report, discourse, news, tale, story, account; thing, affair, matter, business, concern, fact, case, circumstance, occurrence, object, particular, article, proposal, aim, cause, question, subject'. (Platts p.117)

 

((ibaarat : 'Speech; a word, an expression, a phrase; a passage (in a book or writing); an explanation, interpretation; a word, or an expression, or a phrase for, or denoting (such a thing); diction; style, mode of expression; the construction or structure of sentence, composition; a trope or figure'. (Platts p.758)

 

ishaarat : 'Sign, signal; beck, nod, wink, nudge, gesticulation; pointing to, indication, trace, mark; allusion, hint, clue; insinuation, inuendo; love-glances, ogling; dumb-show'. (Platts p.55)

 

adaa : 'Grace, beauty; elegance; graceful manner on carriage; charm, fascination; blandishment; amorous signs and gestures, coquetry'. (Platts p.31)

Nazm:

In this verse kyaa is a particle of connection. (23)

== Nazm page 23

Bekhud Dihlavi:

The meaning is: Oh Ghalib! every single baat of hers is deadly, whether it be expression, or gestures, or style. (46)

Bekhud Mohani:

Her speech, her gestures, her glance-- in short, everything is a mortal disaster; that is, it is heart-stealing. (56)

FWP:

SETS == A,B; GENERATORS; KYA; REPETITION
SOUND EFFECTS: {26,7}
SPEAKING: {14,4}

What a matchless way to end a ghazal like this one. The verse exclaims that the beloved's every baat is a life-threatening disaster, one likely to put an end to the lover completely. The word baat is one of the most common and flexible in the language; the set of 'word/speech/idea' is about as close as I could come to its central meaning.

In this closing-verse, Ghalib extracts extra ambivalence from the kyaa supply that he's been using throughout (see {21,1} for more on this). In the second line, however, he additionally invokes the idiomatic usage kyaa yih ho kyaa vuh ho , 'whether it be this, or whether it be that' (2a). And he adorns the second line with no fewer than three kyaa phrases, all exclaiming at, or questioning, or enumerating, aspects of the beloved's presence.

As so often, we can't tell what the relationship is between the two lines. Do the three wide-ranging qualities praised in the second line constitute separate attributes in their own right, or are they presented chiefly as examples of 'her every baat ', as in (2a)?

In addition to its other virtues, the second line also develops beautiful sound effects: an absolutely perfect rhythmic flow in which the semantic units exactly follow the metrical feet, with the end of each foot corresponding to an occurrence of kyaa . For the meter is: - = = = / - = = = / - = = . Even if you don't know or care much about Urdu meter, you can feel and admire the effect.