Ghazal 39, Verse 2

{39,2}

mashhad-e ((aashiq se koso;N tak jo ugtii hai ;hinaa
kis qadar yaa rab halaak-e ;hasrat-e paa-buus thaa

1) from the tomb of the lover, for miles, {the way / in that / since} henna grows--

2a) to what an extent, oh Lord, there was killing/destruction of/by the longing for foot-kissing!
2b) to what extent, oh Lord, was there killing/destruction of/by the longing for foot-kissing?

Notes:

halaak : 'Perishing; being lost; --perdition, destruction, ruin; --slaughter; death'. (Platts p.1231)

Nazm:

That is, henna grows up from his dust, so that in this way he might reach the foot of the beloved. (38)

== Nazm page 38

Bekhud Dihlavi:

Mirza Sahib says, in the lover's place of martyrdom, for miles henna trees grow up. This is the effect of the blood that was shed at the time of the killing. And the growth of henna is telling us to what extent the martyr longed to kiss her feet. In life, he didn't have access to the beloved's feet, but after becoming dust, now he's manifested himself in the guise of henna and shown the longing to kiss her feet. If the beloved puts henna on her feet, then this longing will be fulfilled. (75)

Bekhud Mohani:

In every direction around the lover's place of execution a grove of henna has sprung up. Seeing this, the poet reflects that the lover had such a longing to kiss the beloved's feet that when in life this desire was not fulfilled, then after death henna has grown up around his tomb, so that perhaps with this excuse he would obtain access to the feet of the beloved. (91)

FWP:

SETS == IZAFAT; MUSHAIRAH

In the first line the word chosen for 'tomb', mashhad , comes from the same root as shahiid and shahaadat , and means 'a burying-place for those especially who have been killed in fighting for religion' (Steingass p.1245); it thus emphasizes the lover's status as a literal 'martyr' to his passion. The use of jo leaves open the question of what use will be made in the second line of the henna fields around the lover's tomb: the jo might mean 'since' and thus suggest a cause and effect relationship, or it might simply gesture toward the henna itself ('the way', 'in that'). (For more on this use of jo , see {12,2}.) (For more on henna, see {18,4}.)

As so often, the second line starts its grammar and imagery afresh, so that the two lines present themselves in an 'A,B' form. And the clever placement of an i.zaafat gives us a 'killing of the longing for foot-kissing'. This can mean one of two things:

=a killing done by the longing-- that is, the killing of the lover by his unbearable longing for foot-kissing
=a killing done to the longing-- that is, the killing or suppressing of the lover's longing for foot-kissing

Then, of course, the second line can be read either as exclamatory ('to what an extent, how extremely!') or interrogative ('to what extent?').

=How grievously the lover has been 'killed' or ruined by his longing for foot-kissing! (All that henna testifies to his fatal, unfulfilled passion.)
=How grievously the longing for foot-kissing has been 'killed' or suppressed! (The longing for foot-kissing, because of (or despite) its fierce suppression, has emerged in the form of henna.)
=To what extent has the lover been killed by his longing for foot-kissing? (To the wondering passerby, all that henna seems to suggest the nature of the lover's torment.)
=To what extent has the longing for foot-kissing been 'killed' or suppressed? (Apparently the lover's death hasn't diminished it a bit, as all this henna suggests.)

On any of these readings, the verse expects us to understand the significance of henna. This significance might be practical: the henna might be harvested and made into the special long-lasting red dye that is used to make complex ornamental patterns on the soles of the beloved's dainty feet. In this indirect and tortuous way, the lover might hope to attain something of his desire. Perhaps his dust might even become merged with the henna.

Alternatively, the henna might simply be read metaphorically: since henna constantly touches the beloved's feet, the lover's longing to kiss her feet-- a longing that either itself killed him, or was not suppressed or 'killed' even by his death-- finds an 'objective correlative' in the wide growth of henna around his tomb.

This verse is a gem of implication. It's up to us to put the two lines together and extrapolate the little narrative that lurks between them. Of course, we can't do this, under mushairah conditions, until we hear the second line, so we have time to relish the strange vision of the lover's tomb encircled by miles of henna plants.

Compare Mir's take on the dead lover's longing for the beloved's feet: M{129,2}.