Ghazal 63, Verse 2

{63,2}

nah kii saamaan-e ((aish-o-jaah ne tadbiir va;hshat kii
hu))aa jaam-e zumurrud bhii mujhe daa;G-e palang aa;xir

1) the equipment of luxury/enjoyment and dignity/grandeur did not provide a cure of/for wildness/madness
2) even/also an emerald cup became, to me, 'spots of the leopard', finally

Notes:

((aish : ''Life; animal life'; a life of pleasure and enjoyment, pleasure, delight, luxury; gratification of the appetites, sensuality; carnal intercourse'. (Platts p.767)

 

jaah : 'Dignity, rank, high position; grandeur'. (Platts p.374)

 

daa;G : 'A mark burnt in, a brand, cautery; mark, spot, speck; stain; stigma; blemish; ...scar, cicatrix; wound, sore; grief, sorrow; misfortune, calamity'. (Platts p.501)

 

va;hshat : 'A desert, solitude, dreary place; --loneliness, solitariness, dreariness; --sadness, grief, care; --wildness, fierceness, ferocity, savageness....distraction, madness'. (Platts p.1183)

Nazm:

That is, I consider an emerald cup to be a 'spot of the leopard', and madness increases. The theme of the verse is trifling, but the simile has given it life. (64)

== Nazm page 64

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, my madness of temperament could not be removed even by equipment for pleasure and pomp, and he presents this illustration of it: that even an emerald cup became, in my eyes, a 'spot of the leopard'. (111)

Bekhud Mohani:

The gist of it is that luxury cannot become a cure for the heart's madness and restlessness. (144)

FWP:

SETS == MUSHAIRAH

This verse puzzled me, but S. R. Faruqi explained it (Jan. 2003) as follows:

Emerald was a popular stone for making drinking vessels and even somewhat larger utensils, perhaps because a) it is soft to carve, b) it is a light stone, and c) it invariably has flaws, so an emerald with few or no flaws is extremely precious. Flawed emeralds can be used conveniently for vessel making. The spots on the leopard are supposed to be green because there is no word for 'brown' in Persian. Urdu also has two totally inappropriate words, bhuuraa or katthaa))ii . Whereas 'brown' has numerous shades. Hatim's dictionary defines 'brown' as qahvaa))ii , that is, 'coffee-coloured'. A leopard's spots are best described in English as 'liver-coloured'.

So if the greenish/brownish-spotted emerald cup ultimately reminds the mad lover of a leopard's coat, it becomes a sign only of further madness/wildness [va;hshat], rather than of civilization and luxury. The madness/wildness of the lover's heart is as innate and unremovable as the leopard's spots. (There's also a nicely appropriate English proverb: 'A leopard can't change its spots'.) For another example of wordplay involving palang , see Nasikh's verse cited in {112,9}.

This would have been a great mushairah verse; for more on this concept, see {14,9}.

The two kii constructions in the first line also strike the eye and ear. Although they look the same, the first is the feminine singular perfect of karnaa , while the second is the feminine possessive adjective; both are agreeing with tadbiir . But you could almost read the line as, saamaan-e ((aish-o- jaah ne tadbiir nah kii ( balkih us ne ) va;hshat kii . That's not of course the intended reading, but it does seem to lurk somewhere on the borderline of awareness.

Actually the cup below is made of jade, not emerald, but it has a wonderfully leopard-ish look: