Ghazal 183, Verse 4

{183,4}*

huu;N z ;xvud-raftah-e baidaa-e ;xayaal
bhuul jaanaa hai nishaanii merii

1) I am a gone-from-myself one, of the desert of thought
2) to forget is my mark/sign/memorial

Notes:

baidaa : 'A desert, an uninhabited dangerous region'. (Steingass p. 217)

 

nishaanii : 'A mark, sign, token, model; a distinctive mark; —a catch-word; —a token of remembrance, keepsake, memorial, souvenir'. (Platts p.1140)

Nazm:

That is, I go out of thought, and that my friends forget me is also my sign/token. By 'thought' is meant 'the friends' thought'; and he has imagined this to be a field, and has described himself as being 'carried away from himself' from this field. (205)

== Nazm page 205

Bekhud Dihlavi:

The meaning is that I go out of my friends' thought, and for my friends to forget me is itself my sign/token. (265)

Bekhud Mohani:

I have become carried away from myself in the desert of thought, and my self-lessness proves this-- that is, my falling silent like young people. My remaining deeply lost says that I'm always absorbed in some thought.

[Or:] I am lost in the desert of thought; those people who forget themselves, find me. That is, I'm always absorbed in my own thoughts and preoccupations, and only those people can understand my state who are in this state themselves. (362)

FWP:

SETS == GENERATORS; IZAFAT
BEKHUDI: {21,6}
DESERT: {3,1}

How much richer and more provoking can an i.zaafat be, than the one in the first line? It's like a pivot around which the various meanings of the line keep turning. Here are some of the possibilities:

=I am one who is gone from himself into the desert of thought-- somehow I can't keep my mind from wandering off into that desolate, abstract wilderness.

=I am one who is gone-from-himself by means of the desert of thought-- the desert of thought itself swoops down upon me, seizes me, and transports me away from myself into its own strange landscape.

=I am one who is gone from himself away from the desert of thought-- somehow I have been lured or dragged away from the desert of thought where I was wandering.

=I am the gone-from-himself one who is of the desert of thought-- that's how you can distinguish me from all the other gone-from-themselves ones.

This remarkable range of possibilities is Ghalib's reward for cleverly and tantalizingly hooking up one abstraction to another, so that it's impossible (without arbitrariness) to narrow down the ways in which the i.zaafat is to be construed.

Then the second line sets up one of his magnificent plays with paradox. A nishaanii is exactly what is used to find, or identify, or remember somebody (see the definition above)-- and my sign/token is 'to forget'. Who is to do the forgetting? Nazm is quite sure that it's the speaker's friends; but nothing in the verse gives us that information. It's obviously very plausible that a gone-from-himself one might do his own forgetting. He might even lose himself completely, as in {161,8}.

For an even more unforgettable example of a paradoxical negative nishaanii , consider the empty finger in {50,2}.

On the power of thought in relation to the desert, there's also the haunting {5,4}.