Ghazal 229, Verse 2

{229,2}*

;hasrat ne laa rakhaa tirii bazm-e ;xayaal me;N
gul-dastah-e nigaah suvaidaa kahe;N jise

1) Longing/grief brought and placed, in your gathering/party of imagination/thought,
2) the bouquet of glances/looks that they would call 'suvaida'

Notes:

;hasrat : 'Grief, regret, intense grief or sorrow; --longing, desire'. (Platts p.477)

 

;xayaal : 'Thought, opinion, surmise, suspicion, conception, idea, notion, fancy, imagination, conceit. whim, chimera; consideration; regard, deference; apprehension; care, concern; --an imaginary form, apparition, vision, spectre, phantom, shadow, delusion'. (Platts p.497)

Nazm:

'Your gathering of imagination'-- that is, my heart, in which you always remain established. In this gathering Longing has brought and placed a bouquet that people call 'suvaida'. The gist is that in the heart that's not a suvaida; rather, it's a bouquet of longing-filled glances. (258)

== Nazm page 258

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, in my heart-- which is your gathering of imagination-- Longing has brought and placed a bouquet of glances that they call 'suvaida'. (They call 'suvaida' that black wound/scar that is on the heart.) The meaning is, as if the suvaida of the heart is a single bouquet of longing-filled glances. (314)

Bekhud Mohani:

That is, the heart has so much longing for your beauty that the suvaida has turned into a bouquet of longing-filled glances. That is, in the heart no thought at all remains except for the vision of you. In one place he has composed a reflection of it: {93,1}. (471)

FWP:

SETS == DEFINITION
GATHERINGS: {6,3}
GAZE: {10,12}

For discussion, and more examples, of the esoteric and never-clearly-defined term suvaidaa , see {3,2}.

The commentators are all quite sure that 'your gathering of imagination' is one that takes place not in your (the beloved's) heart, but in my (the lover's) heart. The analogy is thus to the treatment of 'your thought' [teraa ;xayaal], which does indeed normally refer to 'the thought of you (that is in my mind or heart)'. For discussion and examples of this kind of usage, see {41,6}.

But though 'your thought' may be conventionally established as referring to 'my thought of you', it's simply not the case that 'your gathering' is established as referring to 'my gathering about you'. The reading could far more easily and naturally go the other way. The grammar says, perfectly straightforwardly, that it's the beloved's own gathering, one held by her (even if in her mind), that is under discussion. For verses in which 'your gathering' is quite clearly the beloved's, see {6,3} and {170,3}. Since 'of imagination' is adjectival, I don't see why it would be sufficient in itself to shift the location of the gathering: either the beloved or the lover could host, or be the site of, such a mental event.

The only other evocation of a 'gathering of imagination' [bazm-e ;xayaal] is in {169,5}, and there the 'gathering of imagination' resembles a wine-house, a setting that could go either way: the beloved as Cupbearer might well preside over it, and/or the lover might well spend his evenings in it.

If the gathering is located in the beloved's own inner world, it makes sense that Longing or Grief [;hasrat] would 'bring' [laanaa] and 'place' [rakhnaa] there its strange dark bouquet. If the whole gathering is already taking place in the lover's own mind/heart, that's where the suvaidaa is already located, so what need would there be for such an emphasis on transportation? And why would it be converted into a 'bouquet' made of 'glances' or 'looks', if not for formal presentation in the beloved's gathering, where the lover is perhaps not admitted at all, and of which he's desperate to get even a quick glimpse? Compare {153,5}, another verse in which something negative of the lover's is transformed into something esthetically pleasing when it enters the beloved's presence.

The beloved's 'gathering of thought' seems likely to be located in her mind, rather than her heart (see the definition of ;xayaal above). So she will perhaps perceive the offering as a bouquet rather than a suvaidaa . And in fact, the offering may not be a suvaidaa at all-- it may really be a 'bouquet of glances' which people would casually or mistakenly call a suvaidaa . Perhaps because the glances are so dark with longing, so wounded with passion? Perhaps because they look as though they've been ripped right out of the sender's heart? Perhaps because the lover, in his passion, has a suvaidaa that has actually become in some sense a 'bouquet of glances', darkly and hopelessly focused on the beloved?

That being said, it still seems a bit unmotivated that the beloved is hosting a 'gathering of thought'. What exactly is this? Why is she doing it? Is she an intellectual or a visionary? Does she have an artistic salon? I'm left feeling querulous: I find it hard to believe that 'your gathering of thought' is hosted by anyone other than 'you', but I wish I could think of some other verses in which the beloved maintained anything like an imaginative or imaginary salon. Perhaps her activity along these lines is related to her power to dominate, and deliberately manipulate, the lover's dreams, as in {97,3}.