Ghazal 232, Verse 6

{232,6}*

zamzam hii pah chho;Ro mujhe kyaa :tauf-e ;haram se
aaluudah bah mai jaamah-e a;hraam bahut hai

1) leave me only/emphatically at Zamzam, what do I {want / have to do} with circumambulation of the Ka'bah?

2a) the pilgrimage robe is much soaked with wine
2b) soaked with wine, the pilgrimage robe is much/plenty/enough

Notes:

Nazm:

For goodness sake [bhalaa]-- would I make a circumambulation, or would I sit and wash out the stains of wine? (263)

== Nazm page 263

Bekhud Dihlavi:

He says, leave me only/emphatically at the well of Zamzam, so that I would sit and wash the stains of wine from my garment-hem. What can I receive from circumambulation of the Ka'bah, since my pilgrimage robe is wet with wine? (320)

Bekhud Mohani:

In the rakish [rindaanah] taste, a better verse than this can hardly be composed. He says, what do I {want / have to do} with circumambulation of the Ka'bah-- leave me right here at the well of Zamzam. Because my pilgrimage robe is becoming wet with wine. (491)

FWP:

SETS
ISLAMIC: {10,2}
WINE: {49,1}

In the first line, the speaker first addresses the companions with whom he is making the pilgrimage, and unceremoniously sends them on without him. He tells them to leave him zamzam hii pah -- either 'only' (which would imply that he has no intention of doing more of the pilgrimage rituals) or 'emphatically' (which would leave open the question of his future plans) at Zamzam, the sacred well near the Ka'bah. The clever positioning of mujhe right in the middle of the first line means that it easily extends itself to both clauses.

Then in the second clause, the speaker impatiently brushes off the very idea of his joining his companions in the ritual circumambulation of the Ka'bah: the idiomatic expression mujhe us se kyaa has the literal form of 'to me from that, what?'. Depending on tone and context, the range of meanings can extend from a rejection of desire ('What would I want with that?') to a rejection either of usefulness ('What would I get out of that?'), or even of relevance at all ('What do I have to do with that?').

The second line is a straightforward, neutral-looking assertion-- but a titillating, even shocking, one. The special white pilgrimage robe worn by pilgrims to Mecca is to be kept, like the pilgrim himself, in a particularly high state of purity. For one's robe to be stained with a forbidden substance like wine, and that too right in the precincts of the Ka'bah itself, is in ritual terms extremely unacceptable.

On any possible reading, the verse is a quintessentially 'rakish' [rindaanah] one, because the speaker has obviously been drinking heavily during his pilgrimage: either he's so drunk he didn't even notice the wine-spots on his white pilgrimage robe until he reached Zamzam, or else, even more radically, he's been doing his drinking right there by Zamzam itself. Is he even sorry about this shocking behavior? Perhaps, but not necessarily. On some readings he treats it as a petty and practical problem, like a spilled drink at a party; on other readings, he's not sorry at all. Here are some of the possibilities:

=It would be useless for me to continue the pilgrimage, since my pilgrimage robe has been stained with wine; I might as well just sit here by Zamzam instead (2a). (Spoken resignedly? guiltily? abashedly? vexedly? indifferently?)

=Before continuing the pilgrimage, I need to wash off, in the water of Zamzam, the wine-stains from my pilgrimage robe (2a). (Spoken ruefully? apologetically? resentfully? matter-of-factly?)

=It's so enjoyable just sitting here and drinking, in the pleasant vicinity of Zamzam; and the wine is so overflowing, it's even spilled on my robe; it's too much trouble to get up and deal with the laundry problem, I think I'll just stay here and keep on drinking (2b).

=This 'water' of Zamzam is powerful stuff-- it transports me like wine! I'm so intoxicated with it that my robe too has become saturated with this 'wine'; what more do I need or want from any 'pilgrimage' than this (2b)? (By now we are deep into Sufistic territory.)Name of a celebrated well at Mecca, called Hagar's well.

This verse was one of my earliest favorites. It's one more of the kind that makes Ghalib, Ghalib.

Compare the other Zamzam verse, {180,4}.

Compare this equally brilliant and rakish verse by Mir: M{7,7}.

In this anonymous drawing, the well of Zamzam is in the building with three blue windows and a blue door: