Ghazal 76, Verse 2

{76,2}

jaltaa hai dil kih kyuu;N nah ham ik baar jal ga))e
ay naa-tamaamii-e nafas-e shu((lah-baar ;haif

1) the heart {burns / feels jealous/envious}: why didn't we burn up one time?
2) oh incompleteness of the flame-shedding breath, alas!

Notes:

jalnaa : 'To burn; to be burnt; to be on fire; to be kindled, be lighted; to be scorched, be singed; to be inflamed, to be consumed; to be touched, moved, or affected (with pity, &c.); to feel pain, sorrow, anguish, &c.; to burn or be consumed with love, or jealousy, or envy, &c.; to take amiss, be offended, be indignant; to get into a passion, be enraged, to rage'. (Platts p.387)

Nazm:

That is, the heart {burns / feels jealous/envious} over the fact that every breath produces a movement of incendiary sparks, but incomplete ones. Why don't we burn up completely, all at one time? In so many places the author has versified this medical problem [maslah-e :tibb]! (78)

== Nazm page 78

Bekhud Dihlavi:

The fire that flames in the breast had a claim that we would all at once burn up and turn to ashes. But incompleteness and unsuccessfulness prevent us from burning all at once. (125)

Bekhud Mohani:

This verse can also be appropriate to the disease of fever/consumption [diqq]. (161)

Arshi:

Compare {137,2}, {143,2}. (212, 257, 270)

FWP:

SETS

On the subtleties of nafas , see {15,6}. Arshi rightfully points to {143,2}, which is really strikingly close-- it too involves jalnaa , naa-tamaamii , and a nafas that is aatish-baar .

But this one reminds me of {20,8}-- especially the second line: why would I have minded dying, if it had taken place one time [agar ek baar hotaa]? The possibilities here are the same as in that case. What exactly is the cause of the lover's lament? Here are three possibilities:

1) The burning takes place not once, but many times-- so that we feel we've died a thousand deaths.

2) The burning takes place not all at once, but by degrees and in small increments-- so that we feel we're being slowly tortured to death by flying sparks.

3) The burning takes place not once, but never-- so that we're left longing vainly for the release that death would bring.

As is usual with Ghalib, each of these readings works perfectly with the second line. And in the first line, each yields a slightly different reading of jalnaa in the sense of 'to feel jealousy/envy'-- in each case, we're jealous/envious of those lovers who have attained what we've failed to attain. And perhaps there's a secondary sense in which we're envious of the perfection, the completeness, that we've failed to achieve-- as in {60,1}, in which we {burn / feel jealous/envious} over our own failure to 'burn up' completely at the sight of the beloved.

Nazm refers to the verse as describing a 'medical problem', and I think he's just teasing. But Bekhud Mohani seems to speak in all seriousness. At least he doesn't go so far as to claim that Ghalib had consumption at the time he wrote this verse-- after all, in 1816 Ghalib was only nineteen years old. Let me not get started on another rant about the problems of necharal shaa((irii when applied to the ghazal.