Ghazal 169, Verse 13

{169,13}*

aate hai;N ;Gaib se yih ma.zaamii;N ;xayaal me;N
;Gaalib .sariir-e ;xaamah navaa-e sarosh hai

1) they come into the mind, these themes, from the 'hidden/absent'
2) Ghalib, the scratching of the pen is the voice of an angel

Notes:

;Gaib : 'Absence; invisibility; concealment; anything that is absent, or invisible, or hidden (from sight or mental perception); a mystery, secret; an event of futurity; the invisible world, the future state'. (Platts p.774)

 

.sariir : 'Creaking; grating (as of a door on rusty hinges); scratching sound (of a pen)'. (Platts p.744)

Hali:

His manner of composition [fikr-e shi((r] was that often at night, in a state of intoxication, he used to think [fikr karnaa]. And when some verse came to fruition, the he used to make a knot in his belt-tie [kamar-band]. In this way, having tied eight or ten knots, he would go to sleep. And the next day, through memory alone, he would think of them and consign them to pen and paper.

==Urdu text: Yadgar-e Ghalib, p. 64

Nazm:

That is, if these themes that emerge from your pen are themes of the 'hidden', then you ought to consider the scratching of the pen to be the voice of an angel. (191)

== Nazm page 191

Bekhud Dihlavi:

The truth is that having written such a wonderful ghazal, Mirza Sahib's writing this closing-verse is absolutely not to be counted as boasting; rather, it's the true state of affairs. He says, such lofty themes come from the 'hidden' into my mind-- oh Ghalib, the sound of my pen ought to be considered the voice of an angel. (246)

Bekhud Mohani:

Oh Ghalib, these themes come into my heart from the Lord. The sound of my pen is the voice of Gabriel. That is, I am the Prophet of Poetry, I sometimes have inspiration and sometimes have revelation. (332)

FWP:

SETS == POETRY
WRITING: {7,3}

The complexities of ;Gaib (see definition above) leave the poet, and the commentators, lots of wiggle room. The source can be mystical, religious, unknown, hidden, or completely vague. For another example of the mysteries of ;Gaib , see {98,10}.

The second line too can be read with a variety of tones, from the extremely arrogant to the relatively humble:

=Since I'm directly inspired by the Lord, my writing is in the revelatory voice of an angel

=Since my ideas come from a realm of mystery, and angels come from a realm of mystery too, the two must surely be connected

=Since I'm so deeply creative and inventive, my own ideas are equal to the voice of any angel

=Since there are no real angels (or Gods?) in the world, the best I can do, ruefully or despairingly, is to divinize the scratching of my own pen (compare {62,8}, and especially {174,10})

Moreover, there's nothing in the verse to restrict the frame of reference to the speaker alone: it could be a truth of all human experience-- one either inspiring (God talks to us!) or bleak (we have to invent our own 'angels'), as we choose.

As Bekhud Dihlavi observes, if it's boastful, it's still no more than than the truth, especially coming at the end of a brilliant ghazal like this one.

Other 'scratching of the pen' verses: {39,5x}; {103,4x}, {147,5x}; {147,6x}.