Ghazal 17, Verse 5

{17,5}*

((ishrat-e qatl-gah-e ahl-e tamannaa mat puuchh
((iid-e na:z:zaarah hai shamshiir kaa ((uryaa;N honaa

1) the joy/sociability of the execution-place of the people of longing/desire-- don't ask!

2a) the Eid of sight is the scimitar's being naked
2b) the scimitar's being naked is the Eid of sight

Notes:

((ishrat : 'Social or familiar intercourse, pleasant and familiar conversation, society; pleasure, enjoyment, mirth'. (Platts p.761)

 

na:z:zaarah : 'Sight, view, look, show; inspection; --amorous glance, ogling'. (Platts p.1142)

Nazm:

That is, on the execution-ground lovers find such joy that upon seeing the naked scimitar they consider that the crescent moon of Eid has become visible. Because of the tightness of the meter, the word 'crescent moon' [hilaal] was not able to come in, and the meaning of the verse has remained incomplete. (18)

== Nazm page 18

Vajid:

Urdu text: Vajid 1902 {17}

Bekhud Dihlavi:

Here seeing the scimitar has been said to be equal to seeing the crescent moon of Eid, and this meaning emerges from the words of the verse without thought or reflection. (37)

Bekhud Mohani:

What can I say of how happy the people of ardor are in the execution-ground! In short, for them, the sword's emerging from the scabbard is the emerging of the moon of Eid. That is, for them, seeing the sword in the beloved's hands, to be murdered in the way of the Lord is the happiness of Eid. (42)

FWP:

SETS == INEXPRESSIBILITY; SYMMETRY
GAZE: {10,12}
SWORD: {1,3}

This is one of the great well-known verses of the divan.

On the joy of imminent execution, and the image of the sword, compare {1,3}. For a discussion of the uses-- and positioning-- of the word 'naked' [((uryaa;N], see {6,1}.

Nazm's critique here is reminiscent of his famous attack on {1,1}.

The naked scimitar is not the 'sight of Eid,' but the 'Eid of sight' or the 'Eid of/for/to the sight'. As the commentators explain, the curved scimitar suggests the crescent moon that ends the fasting month of Ramzan and signals the beginning of the festival of Eid. The scimitar is not only curved but also bright and shining like the moon of Eid, and it appears suddenly after one has been looking for it eagerly and with impatience.

Moreover, the meaning of ((ishrat includes not only joy, but also society or companionship-- which is itself very much a part of Eid. (To my mind, Platts has the order of the two definitions backwards: for confirmation of this idea see {17,7}.) Thus the pleasure of the two possible readings of the second line, one of which takes as primary the idea of the crescent moon of Eid (and identifies it with a naked scimitar), and the other of which takes as primary the naked scimitar (and identifies it with the crescent moon of Eid).

And of course, just as the Eid moon signals the approach of a joyous feast and an end to fasting, the scimitar signals to the passionate lover/mystic the approach of joyous union in death with the beloved (and/or God), and the end of a life of deprivation, suffering, and longing. There is even a sexual overtone in the vision of the scimitar's 'nakedness'. Look at the secondary meaning of na:z:zaarah , 'amorous glance, ogling'. It's not for nothing that the death anniversary festival of a Sufi pir is called his ((urs , or wedding festival.