Ghazal 1, Verse 3

{1,3}*

ja;zbah-e be-i;xtiyaar-e shauq dekhaa chaahiye
siinah-e shamshiir se baahar hai dam shamshiir kaa

1) the uncontrolled/uncontrollable passion/emotion of ardor ought to be seen!
2) the breath/life/edge of the sword is outside the sword's breast

Notes:

ja;zbah : 'Passion, rage, fury; violent desire'. (Platts p.378)

 

shauq : 'Ardour, zeal, eagerness, avidity; alacrity, gaiety, cheerfulness; curiosity'. (Platts p.736)

 

dekhaa chaahiye is an archaic form of dekhnaa chaahiye ; GRAMMAR.

 

shamshiir : 'A sword, a scimitar'. (Platts p.733)

 

dam : (P) 'Breath, vital air, life; —a moment, an instant; ... —spring, elasticity; vitality, energy, vigour, stamina, spirit, mettle; strength, goodness, virtue (as of medicines, cloth, &c.); —ambition; —cheerfulness, pleasure, recreation; society (as a breathing together); —edge (of a sword); point (of a spear) ...; a draught (of water)'. (Platts p.525)

 

dam : (P, H) 'Deceit, fraud, trickery, trick, coaxing, wheedling; —arrogance, pride, haughtiness; boasting'. (Platts p.525)

 

dam : (A) 'Blood'. (Platts p.525)

Nazm:

The word dam has two meanings, 'breath' and 'edge', and here both meanings are related and suitable. He has said 'breast of the sword'-- the meaning is that in my eagerness to be slain, such passion is attracting the sword's dam that it is drawn out of the sword's breast. (2)

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Vajid:

Urdu text: Vajid 1902 {1}

Bekhud Dihlavi:

They call the temper and sharpness [aab-daarii] of a sword the dam of the sword. And this aab is always on the outer part of the edge. The lover declares the aab of the sword's being outside the sword to be evidence of the uncontrolled passion of his ardor, and the claim includes a clear proof. Who can doubt that the verse is aab-daar ? (10)

Bekhud Mohani:

The edge of a sword faces toward the outside, but the ardent lover, in the extreme ardor for martyrdom, entirely forgets that everyday fact; instead, he thinks that either out of an ardent desire to slay him, or drawn by his ardent desire for martyrdom, the edge of the sword has emerged from the breast of the sword. This verse is based on 'elegance in assigning a cause'. (4)

FWP:

SETS == EXCLAMATION; REPETITION

SWORD verses: {1,3}; {4,14x}; {12,3x}; {14,3} (with dashnah list); {17,5} (with shamshiir ); {19,4}; {26,3} (with ;xanjar list); {41,3}; {56,5}; {59,6} (with dashnah-o-;xanjar list); {60,4} ( with talvaar ); [{62,7}]; {72,4}; {84,7x}; {91,7} ( chhurii ); {92,3}; {109,7x}; {112,9}; {115,4}; {120,9}; {132,5}; {139,9}; {157,1}; {186,5}; {193,2}, with discussion of aab wordplay verses; {200,2}; {209,4}; {209,8}; {219,7}; {221,2}; {226,2}; {227,3}; {230,8}; {233,13}

Note for grammar fans: dekhaa chaahiye is an archaic form of what would nowadays be dekhnaa chaahiye . For other such instances see {94,1}; {127,2}; and many verses of {189}, in which it's often worked into the rhyming elements.

This eagerness could be an illusion of the lover's passion. Or the uncontrolled enthusiasm could be that of the sword itself, which has come to share the lover's passion. Or, as Faruqi has suggested (July 2000), the emotion could be that of the beloved. The first line gives us a promise of a spectacle, but the emotions may well be those of the beholder.

The real delight of the verse is the lovely wordplay on dam , in which two of its meanings-- the edge of a sword, and the breath-- are dead-on perfect. Is that why the word shamshiir has been so conspicuously repeated, to alert us to the fact that plays it two roles? It is both a weapon and a manifestation of 'ardor'; and of course, we can't tell whether the ardor is its own, or the lover's, or the beloved's. Other verses in which multiple meanings of dam are exploited include: {22,7}; {92,3}, which also features a dam-e shamshiir ; {98,3}.

A SPECIAL DISCUSSION: This verse can also be used as a kind of locus classicus for a discussion of poetic principle. The question is, how much wordplay, and/or philology, is too much? For dam , from Arabic, also means 'blood'; and dam has other Persian- and Hindi-based meanings as well, of 'trickery' and 'arrogance' (see the definitions above). Do those meanings count too? Here are some thoughts on this problem: *FWP*

Another verse in which inanimate things seem to quiver with eagerness: {120,6}.

Compare Mir's brilliant use of the sword's wild emotions: M{144,5}.

It was common for the hilt of a sword or dagger to be given the form of a dangerous animal's head (here, a lion):

Here's a sword-hilt with *an elephant's head*, here's one with *a snake's head* (but then, here's *a horse's head* and *a peacock's head*). Here's one that depicts both predator and prey:

A more systematic look at another shamshiir :

"A Lucknow enamelled shamshir, India, early 19th century. With single-edged watered steel blade inscribed near hilt, silver fittings engraved with floral decoration, remains of green and blue enamelling to the quillons and lion head terminal, the hilt of ivory with cross-hatching and scabbard of shagreen - 36 1/4in. (92cm.) long."